New logo in the making - Feedback is welcome

[Kauket]

Greyscaling is NOT for the result. It is to check your white and black (tone) balance. Having more darker areas will make your lighter areas more pronounced. Like in the 2nd picture with darker background. It will bring your foreground (the letters) closer and more clearer.

The first pic doesn't have enough negative space and the hues and tones are too similar. It helps being blind irl because you can just lean back to see what pops. (just zoom out and use a blur to see what retains design shapes)

---