As for the actual writeup; looks good. Unfortunately I feel that Synth/Planetform-related supplies need to be given like a disproportionately high profit to encourage their anti-factions to seek out those dealing in their target commodities, but that's only half-related.
From my experience a Political-oriented Unlawful faction will live and die on the commitment of its membership towards bouncing forum RP off one another/others with whom they interact unless they're unusually good at the PvP aspect of the game; just be wary of that and anticipate an eventual burnout even in the best of times.
Those times are the ones I look back on most fondly in all my time on the server, though, so done right, it can be a genuine boon to the community. I hope it goes well for you.
