Serpentis feedback thread

[Serpentis]

So, I am slowly getting back into writing and it's all friggin new to me, after having written only plots for DND and other TRPGS, where writing hasn't been important. Here's the only really relevant story.


Lost to the Wind
A story tied to one of my oldest characters on the mod, an old SCRA character.

Here comes a list of characters and their appearances, they also show up the first time a character (that matters) is named (or near), the links are blue and bolden names, should be easy to see, but here is the list.

• Sergei
  
• Heinrich
  
• Karl
  
• Marlon
  
• Alice
  
• Jurgen
  
• Klaus
  
• Stein
  
• Morgan
  
• Julian
  
• Cassie O'clare
  
• Li Hana
  
• Richard Haine
  
• Lina
  

All of the OLD (ancient) stories are unimportant right now, I can link some if you want, but, they're honestly just too old.

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