Oh damn, I need to check my writing before hitting "submit", errors should be fixed!
And yeah, well, I am attempting to improve as I write, it's become a daily ritual for me to write for this story, I have ideas and plots I'd like to put into writing, we'll see what happens.
But I do have the ship in the game ready so. Will have to log on and see if some nice RP can be done and not just roleplay the character in stories.
Thank you again for your feedback, it is highly appreciated.