You're welcome, glad to be of assistance. Also, I'm writing again, one chapter is there already - I'm flying the ship actively and incorporating the RP in the story if I can.
By the way, it's a bit of a shameless promo, but since the ship in the story is basicaly a freelancer not afraid of dirty work... what do you think about my fresh new faction (of one person - me - currently :/ ) ?
/edit/ got an idea that might help you with the errors. Try writting the thing elswhere (I use google) and then putting it into the post and "prewiew" it. I find I can spot a lot of errors when reading through the text in different visuals then when I'm writing.
