Battlegroup Revenant - Feedback

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[01.11.2023 20:50:20] |>R<|RCV-Penance: Ein:*salute* Whats happend?
[01.11.2023 20:50:21] Azure.Specter: Guess the locals don't really care about the NFZ regulations anymore.
[01.11.2023 20:51:28] Azure.Specter: Wouldn't know. Better off asking your pal, the Big... something. Big Apple?
[01.11.2023 20:51:29] |>R<|RCV-Penance: Ein:But the fighting outside the NFZ
[01.11.2023 20:51:40] Azure.Specter: Dipper. Big Dipper.
[01.11.2023 20:52:07] Azure.Specter: Whatever fighting there was, it was taking place outside the NFZ.
[01.11.2023 20:52:17] Azure.Specter: Thing is, they have this little article in the NFZ laws.
[01.11.2023 20:52:32] |>R<|RCV-Penance: Ein:He's onconvy
[01.11.2023 20:52:53] Azure.Specter: "Only Zoner capital ships are allowed to remain within the NFZ, other capital ships may only enter it for sake of a refill."
[01.11.2023 20:53:05] |>R<|RCV-Penance: Ein:yes?
[01.11.2023 20:53:25] Azure.Specter: Well, hey, I'm no Zoner, nor am I behind a steering wheel of one of those Juggernauts.
[01.11.2023 20:53:32] Azure.Specter: So I can't really tell you to scram.
[01.11.2023 20:53:41] Azure.Specter: Just don't be surprised if somebody does.
[01.11.2023 20:54:23] |>R<|RCV-Penance: Ein:thanks your reminding
[01.11.2023 20:55:34] |>R<|RCV-Penance: Ein: I just want to get some  sleep and go back
[01.11.2023 20:55:51] Azure.Specter: You've got a big ship. Not enough barracks to take a nap in?
[01.11.2023 20:56:07] Azure.Specter: Even then, Taba shouldn't be too far off.
[01.11.2023 20:56:09] Death: Maliketh was put out of action by a hostile vessel.
[01.11.2023 20:56:18] Azure.Specter: Or Dabadoru.
[01.11.2023 20:57:17] |>R<|RCV-Penance: Ein:I'm a little confused being called by crazy Allies
[01.11.2023 20:58:19] |>R<|RCV-Penance: Ein:*salute* later sir

Might want to grammar check your recruits. That and their understanding of Capital Ship Roleplay if they're to command one.

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