Reworked Corsair Laws feedback

[Elvinos2003]

First question: Why a rework?
Second question: You are not the only OF corsair faction, did you at least talk to the other one?

you've got to be kidding. current laws:

• Look terrible
  
• Have unenforceable laws
  
• Are extremely outdated or wrong
  
• Too long and dense
  
• Have filler, obvious or unnecessary laws
  

second question: we're not the only corsair faction, true. but we're the only active corsair faction that is actually putting out roleplay, server activity, and effort. oh look, you haven't updated your laws since what, 2015? I remade it from scratch in two afternoons. Maybe if your faction kept our laws styled, lore accurate, maintained, concise and simple, they wouldn't need to be touched.

Sorry to not be the one doing this and sorry to not be an active faction that has not 20 days of activity because of a lack of interest because of numerous reasons.

I could have brought suggestions, true, but I was only just a player among them and couldn't care less about it because of RL.

Overall, I admit it looks good the way you did.

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