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I still feel that these laws are simply too complex for a faction like Corsairs. Laws should be universal for all factions and indies, reflecting their own unique stances and philosophies. I think you should really consider laws like Outcasts have, which narrow in-space guidelines in a few lines.
You're not a House - you're free men and women, who can do whatever they want. If you want to make it unique, I would recommend a trial-by-combat in titans, a man vs man, as one of the options how to settle the conflict of interests in person.