Teide / Reasoner feedback

[Traxit]

taking advantage of the vulnerable position of the insurgents to booster their own numbers and technology.

Mhm yes quite a Corsair reason. If it was anywhere in proximity to Corsair fronts and interests.

Insurgents weren't assimilated by any means, perhaps tricked into thinking they were going to be, but it would never happen in reality. Insurgents were played, with the Corsairs promising luxury, but never delivering it in reality.

Deception, sure. Not exactly a Corsair-like approach for the proud warrior nation.

fear and desperation - insurgents were on the verge of losing everything. the war was already lost, they could stay near Vespucci and be hunted down sooner rather than later or go as far away as possible and try to rebuild without fear of Liberty or Bretonian retaliation. Plausible? yes. Reasonable? definitely not.

Fear and desperation doesn't make a Middle Eastern insurgent abandon their country and join Taiwan in its fight against China, in a naive hope that the Taiwanese will help them in any conceivable way to rebuild.

The crux of the issue mostly stems from the Insurgent's side. It is such a far-fetched idea to escape into the Edge Worlds, out of all places, for a house-borne insurgent. The remaining insurgents have so many options to choose their future in their near vicinity; Xenos, Bretonian unlawfuls, Rheinland unlawfuls, Crayter, Junkers, IMG.

But somehow decided to trust the Corsairs? A criminal empire that funds underworld smuggling into Liberty, which the ideology(Hellfire Legion; The Commonwealth) have historically been opposed to.

Plausible? yes.

This is where we will agree to disagree. Half of it is because of the invalid nature of both organisations working together, and half of it because of your generic, unconvincing points that can be contextually detached and put into any other scenario to make it seem valid. Ultimately putting total disregard to the lore of both factions to make this SRP seem plausible. With your logic I could asylum-seek an LWB cruiser, after their movement's fragmentation, to Malta out of "fear and desperation" -- the same reasons you mentioned.

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Besides all this, I guess I can give you this departing note:
Props for the RP threads themselves, well written and formulated, nice addition of graphics and bbcode. Easy to decipher how this whole operation came to be in the first place, which I'm sure will be helpful to the one reviewing the SRP application.

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