DOWOP/Apparatus Feedback

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Hey there, this type of rp is really cool! I believe something similar is always going on around Sirius, but since we're all mainly warship and trader captains, we don't get to see it in the spotlight.

I believe this type of RP would be even stronger if you contacted the factions mentioned in your reports. At this point, it seems like you're going in solo, and sort of making plausible claims about stuff that's going on. Instead, you could contact factions or their leaders OORP, and try to develop some kind of mini storyline or establish a lore fact.

That way, you yourself have less work to do, because you can just ask a question instead of having to come up with realistic info, and you're involving more people from the community in your rp. Of course, this may require compromise and patience, but I believe the final product will be the better for it.