Aegis Initiative - Official Faction Creation Request

[Karst]

Actually guys - where are your report thread/MD/Internal communications, infothreads, feedback, character rosters etc.?

That stuff should be separate from an OF request thread - I was tryina read the RP but don't even know where

This.

Message Dumps and Character Rosters aren't required of an OF, but an Infopage and a Feedback Thread are, and they should be linked here.

If the contents of this creation request is to be the infopage, it's a bit....short?
I mean, I get that this is a pretty uncomplicated faction, but even for very straightforward BHG it's a little thin. There should be a little more to it than just one single section of general information.
Since it's a combat-oriented faction, maybe some more info on who you primarily fight and where, maybe mention of some of the larger ships that are used, like that Bustard.

Aside from that, the few impressions I have of this faction are pretty negative, and I too question why you are pursuing officialdom with a faction with such a minimalist premise and no apparent need for it.

Edit: Responding to negative but calmly expressed feedback with personal attacks really isn't doing your faction's reputation any favours.

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