Orex Industries - Official Faction Request [2]

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If you want honest feedback, it would really help to actually put some meaningful, gameplay/lore/Freelancer-related information in there. It still reads like soulless, meaningless ChatGPT-generated drivel. The typical ChatGPT bullet point list isn't really helping, but:

Safety
All staff members receive safety training to make sure they understand and can properly execute our safety procedures. This training is consistently refreshed to integrate the safety regulations and techniques.

Wow! That's so cool! I bet your stock would go up by 0.27% at the very least reading this amazing blurb. But what does this mean in the game universe? Could you elaborate? What safety procedures?

I don't know if the nonsense about "abiding by laws" (What laws? You're Zoners in the Omicrons? The Order's laws? The Core? Which ones?) and "sustainability principles" (Are you worried about polluting Omicron Delta? Could you elaborate on this? Is this epic Gaian roleplay?) or whatever is still in some of your infopages, but it all has just come across as utterly lazy. I have yet to be convinced a human being was even involved in the writing of most of the supposed lore of this faction.

Personally I wouldn't have had the balls to draw attention to any of this.

You copy-pasted some text twice here - perhaps from a ChatGPT thread, but I wouldn't make such baseless accusations - and it's still in post-edit:

Orex Industries owes its existence to two extraordinary founders who combined their passion for innovation, entrepreneurship, and humanitarianism: Orex Industries owes its existence to two extraordinary founders who combined their passion for innovation, entrepreneurship, and humanitarianism:

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Let's put it this way. If you don't care at all about your faction's lore and it apparently all just boils down to "We mine Iridium, here's some Lorem Ipsum about how we do it", why should anyone else care? And if nobody cares, why do you want to be official?

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