Orex Industries - Official Faction Request [2]

[Chxlls]

Thank you, @Tunicle, @Haste, and @jammi for the constructive feedback and criticism.

It is clear that the info page needs some updating. As someone who was brought into the command structure only recently, I will see to it that it is updated to the standards you'd like to see an Official Faction operate at.

What I will say, not as a counter-point but as an aside, is that @Venkman has put a lot of time and effort into this faction, alongside the other members, in other ways besides the info page. I understand how important the info page is to a faction, as it represents not only who they are, but who they came from and what they look to be. But, Venkman has done an incredible job with the aesthetics of the BBCode, the pages themselves, and the overall activity of the faction on Discovery as a whole, which to me, speaks more volumes than any info page or writeup could do.

Orex has, since it's inception, provided positive and impactful roleplay in various forms across much of Sirius, and has provided a vital trade artery in Omicron Delta, something that other Zoner factions have been unable or unwilling to do, much like the RPA and the Mollys in Dublin. Additionally, Orex has not only centered a large amount of roleplay around Earhart through forums, but has also had positive interactions, both from a PvP and Roleplay perspective, and is one of maybe 4-5 factions to have actively used Earhart as an extension of its Zone of Influence, rather than people making a bunch of indie ships and trying to avoid interaction at all costs while collecting their much needed code-weapon materials.

Now, Venkman is not a native English-speaker, and obviously, it's much more difficult for him to make perfect-sounding posts when it comes to more in-depth storytelling that an Official Faction should have to be respected amongst the community. That is why I was brought in. And it doesn't need to be reiterated that AI was used to make the original forum pages. As a group, we have higher aspirations as a faction, although, yes, it did start as a group to mine and do Zoner stuff together. We'd like to expand that beyond it's original inception. Perhaps our OFdom request was a bit hasty (no pun intended), but Venkman, and the rest of the leadership, is excited about the faction and wants to share it with others, in a more official capacity.

From now on, if anyone has something to say about the faction's writeups, lore, or quality of storytelling, it falls on my shoulders alone. I will make it my personal responsibility to get Orex where it needs to be in that respect. Feel free to reach out to me on Discord, which you all have, to discuss what needs or does not need to be updated.

Thank you.