Looking for people ready to turn Alliance into something worth while.

[Lord Caedus]

Your writeup seems very interesting, and I wish you luck moving forward with it. Seeing a FA group that isn't going tto be played as complete stooges employed by Samura is a good path to go along, particularly since the whole "Samura runs almost everything in Kusari" angle is already very overplayed. The only thing that leaps out at me to suggest is that you might want to look at having the group be based out of Kamisu Hideout from an inRP perspective, as it would fit much more with your second generation backstory if the group wasn't based out of the movement's historical home at Kagoshima.

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