Horizons Log/Kill Script Stories Feedback Thread

[Helix]

This thread will also now be for my Kill Script roleplay story. The intent of this story is to basically tell his back story up to this point while maintaining a form of mystery to who he was even further back before the story is told. Was he responsible for the detonation of the nuke on Roppongi? Was he an innocent bystander? Did he facilitate it's transportation to the station unwittingly or was he the mastermind? Who knows?

The story also has a hefty amount of "AI" roleplay involved and while I do have some experience RPing an AI, my experience doing so goes back to when AI's were still only accessible with SRP (circa 2007-2009ish). With this in mind, any feedback, suggestions (public or private) are appreciated. It also details certain factions that I will be writing throwaway characters for. If anyone feels that I represented their faction improperly, please let me know how to correct the error and I will happily take any suggestions under advisement.

Thank you for reading thus far, I hope you enjoy!

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"Chaos is the loom. Order its thread. I weave neither. I am the hand that snaps the loom, so the thread may learn to dance."