DarkWing - faction feedback

[Blodo]

No Raekur, we don't want you to post all your stories now and immediately. Take note: what was criticised was the fact that you sent no signals at all to notify others that there is a mystery. It might not just be your fault, might be the fault of everyone else for taking you for granted as well. To improve that however what would be good is if you left us some clues on the forums that we could follow. Something that would get us interested in pursuing information, you know?

See, when your RP assumes spontaneous involvement of other people, it is very much like as if you were making a movie. You need to guide the audience through the story sometimes so that they can realise some things later on on their own. Otherwise the audience gets bored and sleeps through the movie, and we don't want that. So if you actually want people to be asking questions, make the first move and give us a question to ask.

This does not mean posting the entire story on the forums. Just a handful of clues if you wish.