T9| - Division Theta-9

[Deity]

Some sentences are a bit long and dense, which makes them harder to follow—especially when dealing with complex concepts like alien tech and mysterious phenomena.

Try breaking longer sentences into two. It improves readability and adds more impact.

Example:
“As a result of these missions--often times going awry due to their ignorance of the nature of these devices--Section-41 has morphed…”

Could be clearer as:
“Many of these missions went awry due to a lack of understanding of alien devices. As a result, Section-41 gradually evolved…”

- "has lead" → "has led"
Just a small but important fix. "Led" is the correct past participle of "lead".

- Slight awkward phrasing here:
“…to one of researching these unknown artifacts…”
Consider changing it to:
“…into a unit focused on researching these unknown artifacts…”

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