Alster Union - [AU]

[Jinx]

looks OK. - but it also looks a bit boring. - its not like rheinland is a pirates paradies, is it? i m currently not up to date about the new traderoutes ( i was simply too lazy to read it all up ) - but all in all, rheinland does not offer many opportunities for a real pirate ( unless you consider the sigma > new berlin passage satisfying ).

the choice of ships is good - and you will get into trouble once you re facing a few anti-fighter gunboats ( as does every other fighter based faction of course ) - well, you have the advantage that the [RM] is very reluctant to allow "foreigners" in their space - so most encounters should at least be under "control".


maybe i have missed your long term goals in the description... but are there any? what will keep the long term motivation up for a unioner player? will it be the daily piracy? or will there be more about it than just what every generic pirate does. - what makes the unioners unique compared to others. - or if i was totally new there... what would make me choose the unioners over other pirates. - whats there to offer that others do not offer in terms of roleplay, and roleplay opportunities in terms of "how will the unioners affect rheinland in a way that others will not".

about the technicality of the name. - simply "unioners" would have been more appropriate than "rheinland union" ( which sounds like uniting rheinland ) - but thats up to you. the basic layout looks the way that it cannot be critizied much, as you have limited and restricted yourself so much that there s hardly much freedom left to express yourself - except the passage with the salvaged stuff that may be authorized.... . [ Hijacked vessels of other types will be overviewed by the command for authorization. ]

about that passage, how to ensure that - after some time.... not the whole playerfaction will be special authorized to use something that is not listed. - how to keep it "special"?

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