I don't like that so much. Perhaps duplicate the original and have them back to back.
Have a gap inbetween with beams going across, and show cargo pods through them
Plus... i thought it were gonna be a load bigger than this, people would abuse it at this size. Needs to be much longer than the BS IMO
I like the original (first pic in this thread) lots though, and like the idea
But, now no shield whatsoever? give it a bigger hull and okay, but 400k isn't that massive, NPCs would drown this ship if it were out for a long time as is its intention, make it immune to NPCs I think