Feed back thread on the Spider Stories

[Elvin]

Greetings.
My surely bad-written story can be found here : The story (http://discoverygc.com/forums/index.php?showtopic=23883)

Current chapter count: 4

[color=#FFFFFF]1. Please dont post here if you havent read it!
2. If you just wanna tell me that Im idiot or something, do it via PM please (He-he)
3. Any constructive critics wellcomed
4. Any questions about storyline, Jeremy, or anything else will be answered by me, Ill make sure
5. Have a nice day, thanks for any comments in advance

The story will be updated regulary, most likely few times a week ( So if you will like the thing thats there already, make sure to check it from time to time --- Ok, its not possible that someone could like it *sight*)

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