I don't see why Luxury Liners should be included. They are designed to haul rich people around Sirius past planets and celestial phenomena, not act as offices or trading vessels.
Perhaps an emphasis could be made on the Whale, over the Advanced Train, as the Whale was designed/built by the GMG.
Edit: Regarding the following:
Quote:-No '//' in system chat, avoid using it in Local (Use in Local only if something urgent has come up and you need to address it to multiple people (E.g. Having to leave in the middle of a large fight)), in PM, try to use '//'.
I think this should be edited to:
Quote:-No out-of-roleplay messages in system chat, including those marked with '//'. Avoid using oorp chat in Local, unless an urgent situation needs to be mentioned (example, incoming disconnect, disengagement, etc). In PMs, use '//' to mark out-of-character chat.
The mention of "no //" could confuse someone into thinking unmarked OOC is allowed.
Edit Two: Why are mini razors restricted without approval, whilst Supernovas are not? I presume mini razors will primarily be on fighters, so the leadership prefers Train CDs (to chase down pirates before they escape into nebulae)? Supernovas might be considered standard equipment for GMG bomber craft, so I guess that's the reason why. But the mini razor thing needs a bit of explanation (you can pinch my "razor justification" RP if you want).
Edit Three: What do new pilots start in? The previous GMG faction started with... Taiidan HFs for Security personnel and Gas Miners for traders. Will this faction use those restrictions?
I see the Taiidan is higher ranked up than the Eagle. Why? The Eagle is a more expensive piece of tech, and arguably better in combat. I'd suggest:
Rookie
Taiidan HF
Civilian ships (except Eagle)
Lt.
Civilian Ships
Stinger
Taiidan HF
If the Stinger is being restricted due to its hitbox issue, then take into account balance changes next version. I think it should be available earlier, if it's fixed next version.