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Orin

10-05-2008, 11:54 PM,

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Griff Vahl and his History

I kept his history very simple, and very straightfoward. I would appreciate any feedback as to how cohesive the account is, and how well it's written; as simple as the writing style I used here is.

Thank you.

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