I do understand you. The main point of my feedback, I believe you missed.
Yes, Draya isn't necessarily descriptive, but I was talking about events that you could have meagerly described that may not have happened within the scope of the game. In essence, I'm not saying add more description to what is already there, but to add what isn't already there. Instead of adding fat to the meat, you need to have the meat on the bones first.
For instance, to include something that I was hinting at before, you can describe how she actually met the Junker, or maybe how she defended herself from another rude Rogue.
All of those things can't happen in the regular scope of the game, but it can in your imagination. That was what I was looking forward to reading.
Quote:[7:42:05 PM][6:51:36 PM] Igor (Smokey): btw terry
[6:51:48 PM] Terrance Cooper: Ye?
[6:52:00 PM] Igor (Smokey): nothin
[6:52:03 PM] Igor (Smokey): just sayin btw
[6:52:05 PM] Terrance Cooper: <_<
Quote:Johnny_Haas: you shot anti criuse speed rockets!!!
Johnny_Haas: but why????
Johnny_Haas: ??
Johnny_Haas: why you shoot criuse speed rockets?
