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Official Valhalla Rising feedback thread...

MB52

10-21-2008, 10:04 PM, (This post was last modified: 09-08-2009, 06:49 AM by MB52.)

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Alright, so I've gotten to a point in the story where I think I could use some feedback to say if I'm on the right track or not. Keep in mind this is my first attempt at any type of lengthy RP or story, so any feedback, positive or negative is greatly appreciated.

I'm at the point now where I'll be getting writing again (after a month and a half break due to school) and anything will be greatly appreciated.

Thanks. :P

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Official Valhalla Rising feedback thread... - by MB52 - 10-21-2008, 10:04 PM

Official Valhalla Rising feedback thread... - by MB52 - 09-08-2009, 06:29 AM

Official Valhalla Rising feedback thread... - by MB52 - 09-12-2009, 08:00 PM

Official Valhalla Rising feedback thread... - by Hundra - 09-12-2009, 08:21 PM

Official Valhalla Rising feedback thread... - by Death.RunningVerminator - 09-12-2009, 08:27 PM

Official Valhalla Rising feedback thread... - by MB52 - 09-12-2009, 10:30 PM

Official Valhalla Rising feedback thread... - by jimmy Patterson - 09-13-2009, 07:42 AM

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