Fletcher & Co. Roleplay Help and Feedback Request Thread

[Fletcher]

I'd love feedback on Broken Skies.

http://discoverygc.com/forums/index.php?sh...c=23814&hl=

I'm fairly certain it needs no editing, but feedback would be nice.

Read the story, I sent the feedback to you.

Ding ding ding I like this story, kind of sounds like a typical love story in the making though. Need to find someway to stray it from that direction, unless thats what your gunning for.

Still this is a very well written and well presented story, I enjoyed reading it and any story that does that gets a thumbs up from me.

I did spot some errors :unsure: I don't think it needs correcting unless the grammar Nazi's come ringing. :wacko:

I hope you pick the story up again soon, I like it.

**Again sorry for multi-posting, that's all the work I'm doing today, now to play FL!**

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