First off your ship list is not acceptable. You have both Kusari and Breotnian ships on it, which is a no-go. Military GB's without diplomacy to back them up? You allow pretty much any fighter or Bomber, because with the right RP a freelancer can get pretty much any fighter or Bomber. So you have the option of any fighter or bomber and 3/4 of the Lawful GB's in the game. You have no weapons list. Another point to consider is using the Freelancer ID, goes against the idea of a Freelancer ID. The ID is for individuals not factions. Lastly and most importantly to me, Your 3 sentences of description for your faction that you say you have put alot of time into seems insufficient.
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