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11-07-2008, 08:36 AM,

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Yes, "both" Anthonys are the same guy, hence the same names (note that he asked for transport to FP1 at the end of the first one). No, they are not meant to be read back-to-back, most writing I do starts somewhere in the middle and ends somewhere in the middle.
As for the dialogue...like i said, my creativity..ahem..."died", so anything to help there is good.

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Feedback for my stories - by Derkylos - 11-04-2008, 07:11 AM

Feedback for my stories - by Derkylos - 11-07-2008, 02:10 AM

Feedback for my stories - by Laowai - 11-07-2008, 03:18 AM

Feedback for my stories - by Derkylos - 11-07-2008, 08:36 AM

Feedback for my stories - by Doc Holliday - 11-07-2008, 10:07 AM

Feedback for my stories - by Derkylos - 11-08-2008, 02:01 AM

Feedback for my stories - by Dieter Schprokets - 11-08-2008, 02:09 AM

Feedback for my stories - by Derkylos - 11-08-2008, 02:58 AM

Feedback for my stories - by Tomtomrawr - 11-11-2008, 07:37 PM

Feedback for my stories - by Niezck - 11-11-2008, 11:09 PM

Feedback for my stories - by Derkylos - 11-12-2008, 03:37 AM

Feedback for my stories - by Derkylos - 12-01-2008, 04:55 AM

Feedback for my stories - by Zapp - 12-01-2008, 05:02 AM

Feedback for my stories - by Malaclypse 666 - 12-01-2008, 06:25 AM

Feedback for my stories - by Derkylos - 12-01-2008, 08:27 AM

Feedback for my stories - by Zapp - 12-01-2008, 02:16 PM

Feedback for my stories - by DeathsOverture - 03-03-2009, 05:56 PM

Feedback for my stories - by jammi - 03-03-2009, 06:03 PM

Feedback for my stories - by Tarkis - 03-03-2009, 09:49 PM

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