Logo for Dublin race

[tazuras]

Well that pretty much eliminates all my criticism but I would still like to talk about the text. I know you wanted contrast there and I think it should be there I just think it is a little too much contrast, for that reason and for readability's sake I think it would look better with a little more space between the letters, of course I wouldn't know unless I saw it.

The other thing I was just thinking of was making the subtitle a little brighter blue like the main title, although then there would be less contrast with the sun, tough.

Regardless, I think my main point is that the main title and subtitle don't relate enough for me. Again pretty subjective but I like talking about design if ya couldn't tell.

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