Orbital Spa & Cruise

[cmfalconer]

I can haz fakshun 2?

OS&C has a lot of potential as a faction if done correctly. Party-barges galore. But this "proposal" just screams inadequacy. Let's try to get some more help for you.
-First, Please comb through This thread for help on properly formatted faction proposals, which is pretty much what a status is.

-Next, the ship-list. It's been mentioned before, but here's the deal: OS&C flies Lux Liners, Armored Tranports, Hawks, Falcons, Eagles, and that's it. With Disco, I could see Arrows, Rocs, and the other liners (barring Prison)...that's IT. No Trains, Transports, Whales, or any other fighters. OS&C would hire out shipment of goods to/from their stationary bases, so no real need for that...and their liners can hold a decent amount of cargo and still carry passengers.

-Next, Description: Flesh this out more. Give some traderoute examples...heck, search the internet for travel companies and "borrow" their ideas for OS&C.

-Next, Faction Status: I can read an infocard. Player-factions are what you need my boy. send PM's to faction leaders to get their permission/idea about how they should and will act toward you, especially with the contraband.

-Next, Rules: See above. Expect to get a LOT of hassle for carrying those artifacts in particular. If you have something worked out with the local mounties five-oh first, it goes a long way.

-Next, Entry and Salary: Nice ideas. But Instead of getting a transport, new-employees purchase an ARMORED transport from Cali-Minor first, then get their tag/id in order with that. 5m should be plenty to get started in that. After time, they can be "promoted" to one of the smaller (Kusari I think) liners then.

This is about as constructive as I can be.

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