Faction

[tazuras]

As for the GC I would say you are right, concept sounds pretty good, you need a good deal more back story though, how did they start, who founded them, when did they start, what are most of the pilots like, are they trained to be fanatics, brainwashed or just very hardened soldiers, etc, etc.

Not sure if your looking for this at this point but here's my precise English edit, I struck through most deletions but didn't highlight additions cause I was lazy:

The Shadow Army : In Credits We Trust

The Shadow Army is a private military <strike>company</strike> contractor with headquarters <strike>based</strike> on most of the <strike>Sirius</strike> capital planets of Sirus. With their large training facility <strike>they are</strike> The Shadow Army is training <strike>over</strike> more than 30,000 personal a years to provide private planet side security <strike>on planets</strike> to those who will offer the most credits. The Shadow Army <strike>is reputate</strike> has a reputation for <strike>having</strike> getting the job done quickly and with the <strike>less</strike> least collateral damage on the society, <strike>from there come</strike> hence their name ‘’Shadow Army’’. The Shadow Army does not accept contracts from smalls company, they mostly operate in War Zones or in Large Conflict Areas. Over a period of ten years, the Shadow Army <strike>have</strike> has provided security on planets, but the time has come for them to have their own vessels to expand their business in outer space. The Shadow Army research teams have been trying to develop new <strike>technological weaponry</strike> weapon technology to fit in their small sized Fighter and Bomber but failed, which resulted in them using ships that didn't belong to any of the important Sirus factions, as they try to keep diplomatic relations ‘’Neutral’’ <strike>torward</strike> with everyone when they’re not engaged in a Contract. The Shadow Army company will be accepting contracts from all large Sirus factions needing assistance by :

)Providing system security,
|__Hailing inside <strike>Controlled</strike> limited access Zones of Influence of the faction
|__Conduct Secondary hail/interception inside <strike>Controlled</strike> limited access <strike>zone</strike> ZOIs of the faction.
|__Conduct security patrols of <strike>Controlled</strike> Limited Access <strike>zone</strike> ZOIs of the faction.

)Ship Assistance
|__Track enemy vessels within <strike>Controlled</strike> limited access <strike>zone</strike> ZOIs of the faction.
|__Provide immediate <strike>assistance against</strike> interception of enemy vessels of the faction.

)Escorts
|__Provide IMPORTANT convoys <strike>a</strike> the maximum of security,
|__Destroy enemy ships within proximity of convoys and <strike>Controlled</strike> limited access <strike>zone</strike> ZOIs of the faction.
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(Note that the Escorts do not offer protection for small and independent trading vessels)

The Shadow Army will not be affiliated with :

)Acts of terrorism against any lawful or unlawful base or planet.
)Smuggling or escorting smuggler Convoys.
)Openly pirating trading ships in Sirus space.


Shadow Army Ships and IFF :

All Shadow Army members and ships will be tagged with NO IFF and will be equipped with standard Mercenary IDs.

Shadow Army Ranks :
Soldier Division –
1)- Private (Recruit) (Pter)
2)- Private (Pte)
3)- Corporal (Cpl)
4)- Master Corporal (Division Chief) (MCpl)

Officer in Charge –

1)- Lieutenant (Lt)
2)- Captain (Cpt)
3)- Lieutenant-Major (Lt.Maj)
4)- Major (Maj.)
5- Commander (Cmd.)

Soldier Division ships will be tagged as follow : (SA-SD)Rank.Name.Lastname.
Example : (SA-SD)Cmd.William.Doyle


((As Mercenary ID allow to fly Freighter, we would like to have our own Luxury Liner as our base of commands for Communication & Intel Operations))
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Intelligence & Communication Division : An I&C Division has been created by the Shadow Army to make contact with the factions willing to hire them as well as having their own small <strike>dispatch units</strike> compliment of Light Fighters to go gather intelligence in enemy lines. The I&C Positions go as follow :

1)- Logistic Officer (LO)
2)- Communication Officer (CO)
3)- Public Relation Officer (PRO)

I&C Division ships will be tagged as follow : (SA-IC)Position.Name.Lastname
Example : (SA-IC)CO.William.Doyle

Ships used : Eagle - Very Heavy Fighter, Tiger Shark - Light Fighter, CTE-10000 Civilian Bomber



Shadow Army Factions Relation –

Hostiles : -
- Xenos
-Nomads
-Phantoms
-Wild
-Golden Chrysanthemum

Neutral : Any Faction other than the ones stated above who wish to have business with the Shadow Army.

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