Hellfire Legion: The Capture of the Razor

[Chucc]

That and the fact that even a dreadnought can't take a BS out, definitely not an Osiris in just a few hits from its main gun. Just not realistic. Same for the BS group getting tagged. Any BS is gonna take a few minutes at least to drop. And the NPC's donn't come in goroups of BSes. Just minor kinks to work out. Otherwise, very well done and now you have a good reason to have a Corsair GB. At least you put the effort in to give a background story. Also, you stated early in the story the fighters needed something to give support, then there all of a suddne two cruisers. Um don't they support fighters? Over all I give it a 'B'.

Which just happens to be short for Bravo.

Oh yeah, also might want to think aout the Corsairs coming to get it back or destroy it later. Extra credit stuff you know. :yahoo:

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Looking into returning, maybe.