Hellfire Legion: The Capture of the Razor

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Ahem Grammer is fine, I use Microsoft word and you are not the one to lecture me on Grammer..... I explained how I got the gunboat some people here are missing the point. And please to do not offer anything but Constructive Criticisim unless you have an idea about how to make it better and don't just say exlpain some things more. Tell me why, what and how you think it should go because just pointing out flaws does nothing for me or anyone else for that matter.

And I just threw the two Cruisers in there because I needed them to make it work and be thankful you were even in there Vulture was mentioned his crusier is fresh off the line. And it is two pages by industry standards so I think it is long enough to explain the simple capture of a gunboat it is not some epic story i have one of those in the works anyways.....

And thank you Dab for expressing my opinion before I could....