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12-02-2006, 08:59 PM,

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Sorry it took so long to notice this, but I have a few comments to add.

First, it's good to see an interesting story like this. There is just one small detail with part one; did they start from New London or from Cambridge? Early on you say they were on New London, and in the other two parts you mention them having a place there. But during the conversation with the RM officer you mentioned the Cambridge Research Institute, which is on Cambridge. You also mention them taking off from Cambridge after they get the gunboat. So, which one is it?

Oh yeah, I'd really like to see part 4...

It's official, I have too few ships now...

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Roddy and Rita - by Qunitinius~Verginix - 11-09-2006, 07:24 AM

Roddy and Rita - by Yngen - 11-10-2006, 03:16 AM

Roddy and Rita - by BestFlyerHere - 11-10-2006, 03:42 AM

Roddy and Rita - by Qunitinius~Verginix - 11-11-2006, 08:34 PM

Roddy and Rita - by Koolmo - 11-12-2006, 02:07 AM

Roddy and Rita - by Fellow Hoodlum - 11-12-2006, 02:16 AM

Roddy and Rita - by Koolmo - 11-12-2006, 02:17 AM

Roddy and Rita - by Yngen - 11-12-2006, 03:01 AM

Roddy and Rita - by Qunitinius~Verginix - 11-12-2006, 07:01 AM

Roddy and Rita - by Dab - 11-12-2006, 07:21 AM

Roddy and Rita - by Qunitinius~Verginix - 11-12-2006, 07:40 AM

Roddy and Rita - by Qunitinius~Verginix - 11-13-2006, 07:11 AM

Roddy and Rita - by Qunitinius~Verginix - 11-14-2006, 04:50 AM

Roddy and Rita - by McNeo - 11-14-2006, 08:29 AM

Roddy and Rita - by marauder - 11-14-2006, 04:32 PM

Roddy and Rita - by Qunitinius~Verginix - 11-15-2006, 06:13 AM

Roddy and Rita - by Qunitinius~Verginix - 11-16-2006, 02:59 AM

Roddy and Rita - by marauder - 11-16-2006, 01:00 PM

Roddy and Rita - by McNeo - 11-16-2006, 01:11 PM

Roddy and Rita - by Captain_Purge_All - 11-16-2006, 09:09 PM

Roddy and Rita - by Qunitinius~Verginix - 11-16-2006, 09:10 PM

Roddy and Rita - by Captain_Purge_All - 11-16-2006, 09:12 PM

Roddy and Rita - by Captain_Purge_All - 11-16-2006, 09:14 PM

Roddy and Rita - by Qunitinius~Verginix - 11-16-2006, 09:16 PM

Roddy and Rita - by Nightfall - 11-17-2006, 12:15 AM

Roddy and Rita - by Qunitinius~Verginix - 11-17-2006, 12:44 AM

Roddy and Rita - by Captain_Purge_All - 11-17-2006, 01:48 AM

Roddy and Rita - by BestFlyerHere - 11-17-2006, 01:50 AM

Roddy and Rita - by Qunitinius~Verginix - 11-17-2006, 03:06 AM

Roddy and Rita - by Vo - 11-17-2006, 04:47 AM

Roddy and Rita - by Captain_Purge_All - 11-17-2006, 05:54 AM

Roddy and Rita - by Qunitinius~Verginix - 11-17-2006, 06:12 AM

Roddy and Rita - by Aeon - 11-17-2006, 07:04 AM

Roddy and Rita - by Qunitinius~Verginix - 11-17-2006, 07:07 AM

Roddy and Rita - by Captain_Purge_All - 11-18-2006, 05:06 PM

Roddy and Rita - by Qunitinius~Verginix - 11-18-2006, 07:16 PM

Roddy and Rita - by Qunitinius~Verginix - 11-19-2006, 08:14 PM

Roddy and Rita - by Captain_Purge_All - 11-19-2006, 09:04 PM

Roddy and Rita - by Qunitinius~Verginix - 11-20-2006, 06:14 AM

Roddy and Rita - by Wolfpack98 - 11-20-2006, 09:19 AM

Roddy and Rita - by Qunitinius~Verginix - 11-21-2006, 02:40 AM

Roddy and Rita - by Nightfall - 11-21-2006, 09:40 AM

Roddy and Rita - by Qunitinius~Verginix - 11-23-2006, 04:02 AM

Roddy and Rita - by Knucklehead - 12-02-2006, 08:59 PM

Roddy and Rita - by Qunitinius~Verginix - 12-02-2006, 10:02 PM

Roddy and Rita - by Qunitinius~Verginix - 12-09-2006, 09:29 PM

Roddy and Rita - by Qunitinius~Verginix - 12-10-2006, 02:39 AM

Roddy and Rita - by BestFlyerHere - 12-10-2006, 11:12 PM

Roddy and Rita - by Qunitinius~Verginix - 12-11-2006, 03:18 AM

Roddy and Rita - by BestFlyerHere - 12-20-2006, 12:26 AM

Roddy and Rita - by Qunitinius~Verginix - 12-20-2006, 12:30 AM

Roddy and Rita - by supernova - 12-20-2006, 01:17 AM

Roddy and Rita - by Qunitinius~Verginix - 12-30-2006, 07:50 AM

Roddy and Rita - by Qunitinius~Verginix - 12-31-2006, 12:50 AM

Roddy and Rita - by Qunitinius~Verginix - 12-31-2006, 08:03 AM

Roddy and Rita - by Qunitinius~Verginix - 01-01-2007, 08:56 PM

Roddy and Rita - by Hawke - 01-01-2007, 11:45 PM

Roddy and Rita - by BestFlyerHere - 01-02-2007, 01:31 AM

Roddy and Rita - by Qunitinius~Verginix - 01-02-2007, 06:36 AM

Roddy and Rita - by BestFlyerHere - 01-02-2007, 09:44 AM

Roddy and Rita - by Qunitinius~Verginix - 01-02-2007, 06:34 PM

Roddy and Rita - by afoofis - 01-31-2007, 08:04 PM

Roddy and Rita - by Qunitinius~Verginix - 02-05-2007, 07:33 AM

Roddy and Rita - by Qunitinius~Verginix - 02-06-2007, 04:49 AM

Roddy and Rita - by Qunitinius~Verginix - 02-06-2007, 05:36 AM

Roddy and Rita - by Qunitinius~Verginix - 02-06-2007, 07:33 AM

Roddy and Rita - by BestFlyerHere - 02-08-2007, 12:22 AM

Roddy and Rita - by Qunitinius~Verginix - 02-08-2007, 03:07 AM

Roddy and Rita - by Techimo - 03-06-2007, 04:58 PM

Roddy and Rita - by Qunitinius~Verginix - 03-06-2007, 08:34 PM

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