Galactic Trader Company

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OH...KAY.....

Welcome to the Disco. Nice first post.


However, you forgot:

1. Introduction
   Brief overview of the following points. Other sections have all the detail.
   
2. History.
   Who are you? who started the clan? why was it started? where was it started? Where are you based and how did you come to be there?
   
3. Diplomatic relations.
   Who are you chummy with? Who are you not?
   
4. Ship List.
   by ranks? which ships? bret/kus/rheinb/gmg/img/zoner/civi/pirate/junker/other
   
5. ZOI.
   Am i gonna meet you in vespucci? gamma? alpha? alaska?
   
6. Roll Call. (who is leading the clan?)
   A clan MUST have a leader. who is it?
   
7. Rules (need expansion).
   'Your (sic) are your own boss'. What does this mean?
   'Help if you can' has a lot of leeway. But if you're in a trader and your friend is getting ganked by three pirate bombers, how much help are you realistically going to be able to give?
   How much is the fee for escorts? And why have you used the 'read the forum' smiley? which forum? do you have another message dump? What is the advantage of joining your clan? An indy has to hire mercs, your guys have to hire the people in your own clan (!).
   'Revenge is good' Nope. It's not. Not getting pirated in the first place is good. Revenge often leads to sanction reports.
   

A trader faction with it's own defense wing. Good idea. But we've no idea who you are from this post. Are you lawful or unlawful? From the actions of one of your players on the list, i'm guessing unlawful, especially as he/she is KOS in bretonia, apparently.

Edit the post, remove the smileys, pay the 500mills, stick the missing parts in, read the stickys on how to write one up.

OR: join an established clan, see the diplomacy, see how it works, avoid more of your players getting sanctioned, and in six months time, go for it again.


Good Luck!


Mud

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