[_] Order of the White Dragons

[wrathkin]

I have a couple of issues with this, and I assume that's what in this thread is all there is (i.e. that deals with KNF/KSP/BD/AFA has not been made):

5.) Though we operate out of the Naval Forces and State Police Chain of Command, Respect they're wises. If the ship/person in question is carrying Artifacts, Nomads, Wild, or Nomadic Weaponary. You are to take control of the situation.

According to current RP, Sulu - the head of KNF - is the Shogun (as seen in the Emperor's bio), and the head of the KSP (Kenzo) is the Machi-Bugyoh, both directly subordinate to the Emperor (and in the case of the Shogun, probably only nominally so). There is no 'out of command' and still in KNF/KSP. This needs to be sorted out with the Council of the Rising Suns (that is, the leadership of the Kusari lawful and semi-lawful factions). Why would a KNF/KSP officer submit to you unless you have arranged that with their faction leaders?

Also, the artifact trade is controlled by the Hogosha. If you turn the Hogosha hostile by cracking down on one of their main incomes, I would expect most of Kusari to turn unfriendly - they have a lot of influence at the court. I cannot really see funding through the military or civilian chain coming without approval from the court, and the court would not approve what amounts to a war against the Hogosha.

7.) Operations outside the Zone of Influence are to be reported directly to the Daimyo for permission to carry on. However, Operations that involve chasing down and destroying an Alien target can proceed without permission from the Daimyo.
11.) If an Alien vessel is spotted within another House space, contact the authorities of that house and ask if they require assistance. If they do not respond, deploy over there quickly.

You are going to bring KNF/KSP IFF+ID:d ships into other houses? Bad idea. Keep to Kusari.

9.) Any Civilian, Un-authorized Naval/Police Personnel, Traders, Smugglers, Pirates found near the White Dragons base of operation are to be turned around by any means necessary. Destruction of target ship is last resort. Alien/Paranormal Threats are to be destroyed on sight.

This, as well, needs to be taken up with the current inhabitants of Kusari. We're talking of officers murdering civilians, as long as this is not in the Kusari laws.

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