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03-03-2009, 09:49 PM, (This post was last modified: 03-03-2009, 09:50 PM by Tarkis.)

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Just read them all, and they were all good and easy to fully read.
Except for the last, which was a bit hard to read all the way through.
That's just because it's not a story, but a short bit on every member of a crew. So it's not "bad".

I don't have any suggestions on making them better,
they're good enough as is, imo.

Character Stories/Backgrounds:
Cat o' Nine Anodyne (Character no longer exists.)
Delirium (Character no longer exists.)
Journal of Tarkis, the Orphan.(Character no longer exists.)
Story of Iggy, the Amazing Citizen. (Character no longer exists.)

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Feedback for my stories - by Derkylos - 11-04-2008, 07:11 AM

Feedback for my stories - by Derkylos - 11-07-2008, 02:10 AM

Feedback for my stories - by Laowai - 11-07-2008, 03:18 AM

Feedback for my stories - by Derkylos - 11-07-2008, 08:36 AM

Feedback for my stories - by Doc Holliday - 11-07-2008, 10:07 AM

Feedback for my stories - by Derkylos - 11-08-2008, 02:01 AM

Feedback for my stories - by Dieter Schprokets - 11-08-2008, 02:09 AM

Feedback for my stories - by Derkylos - 11-08-2008, 02:58 AM

Feedback for my stories - by Tomtomrawr - 11-11-2008, 07:37 PM

Feedback for my stories - by Niezck - 11-11-2008, 11:09 PM

Feedback for my stories - by Derkylos - 11-12-2008, 03:37 AM

Feedback for my stories - by Derkylos - 12-01-2008, 04:55 AM

Feedback for my stories - by Zapp - 12-01-2008, 05:02 AM

Feedback for my stories - by Malaclypse 666 - 12-01-2008, 06:25 AM

Feedback for my stories - by Derkylos - 12-01-2008, 08:27 AM

Feedback for my stories - by Zapp - 12-01-2008, 02:16 PM

Feedback for my stories - by DeathsOverture - 03-03-2009, 05:56 PM

Feedback for my stories - by jammi - 03-03-2009, 06:03 PM

Feedback for my stories - by Tarkis - 03-03-2009, 09:49 PM

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