Make the Dragon slightly more bolded (but only slightly, I still like the idea of it being "hidden" in a sort of way).
Also, very nice font but here: Sen'[s]hi
the [s] there, I can barely read that. Is it possible to be fixed? If not, then change font.
Other than these two things, don't need to change anything else.
Also, I'm very, very sorry for dragging this whole thing into three pages. I hope my nitpicking isn't frustrating, please tell me so. I don't want you to spend your life fixing this for me.
Oh and, after you are done with my two requests, then I will conclude your signature as your final submission and I will start evaluating between yours and Serpentis.