Free Trade Guild

[tazuras]

Well you should know that this is not a faction creation request in my opinion, there is no faction history, it contains OORP text that is not denoted, there's not nearly enough RP for the faction itself and you should really have a more specific list of allowed ships and weapons. You might want to look at some of the other creation requests that were granted and compare the length and content. Also yo have to pay 500 million credits, which I would not spend on this as I can tell you right now it wont be accepted. This should be moved to the parent forum and should be re-titled to ask for feedback so you can improve it to the point where it will be accepted.

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