I normally hate feedback threads, but I gotta jump sometime

[Caribe]

I actually enjoyed reading that. I feel as if I'm there. However the characters seem a bit blurry. In other words you described the surroundings and ambient well however I can't really see a difference between the characters by their appearance. It's kind of like the clones from starwars they all look the same but have different personalities and age.

Hey you wanted criticizim, you got it.

My three cents.

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Been here since Discovery 4.77 (lurk mode engaged)

I have recently met and discussed with Atalawohisdi the trader that flies the Caribe. Just so everyone knows, I engaged in Sigma 13. He flies through half the system before going back to New Berlin, where he cruises from one side of the system to the other, hugging the sun as close as he can. All the while, he flies near Battleships trying to scrape me off. I finally send out the white flag, and move back to Sigma 13. However, it was a ruse, and he bit. Knowing his trade route, I interdicted the trade lane and the chase began anew. It ended, an hour after it began, with me retreating, out of Countermeasures and getting very irritated.

He kept boasting how he has never been caught; I'd like to see him beat until he begs to pay, then beaten some more.

- Best day ever.