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Enslaved Angel Girl

Misao Mitsurugi is a 16 years old girl of the Kusari Empire' noble cast. After being influenced through books and personal encounter with various commoners, she decides to escape home and join the revolutionary forces of Kusari. Her illusion for a better world fade away soon enough in a few weeks stay among the Chrysanthemum, as she discovered the group, while having grown in power and number exponentially, was also divided by multiple in fighting.

Too ashamed to admit her own defeat, she refuses to go home despite the generous bounty put on her head for anyone bringing her back to New Tokyo safely. Instead, she goes living on the wild with her ship, trying to live some life as she hops from one place to another, in search of a job, always in place where the police enforcement was the least present... which led her, little by little toward the underworld of Kusari crime, without her even realizing it...

The story begins when she lands on a seemingly abandoned star port on planet Kyushu...

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The story is co written by me and HeavyMetalQueen. Now, read, and comment!!! NAU!!!
Special thanks to stewcool grammar nazi who corrected first few posts.
Misao and the slave liner Heavy Metal Queen are existent characters on server!

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