I like it. Expecially about cap ship usage. I think other faction could use such system too.
Now few points which came to my mind (positive ones):
- Yes, I agree with you, order really should act like this instead to open warfare
- I agree with cutting alliance with Corsairs. But anyhow Osiris stays at corsair hands, since in rp corsairs has the blueprints and knowlange how to built one.
- All in all it really should make Order a better faction
Now few negatives:
- You don't really need so much osirises around the sirius imo
- Do you realise that if you will start stoping artefact smugglers you'll become hostile to corsairs?
- Now bundschuh alliance and dragons. Order never had alliances with these factions. They ahd only agents in those factions but not open alliance. Heck Ozu wasn't orderer at all he was a dragon. He haven't even known that Tekagi is posesed being by a nomad. Order used him. Thats all (remember the line "tekagi is acting strage even for him lately" which means he doesn't have a clue about possesion)
But agian. Its a good suggestion.
P.S do you realise that those lolwutter of yourse will simply trasnfer to liberty or gamma?
