Does this look...

[tansytansey]

The first thing that stands out is the ear. It's too high. Measure on your own face to see where they go, but generally the top of the ears are around eye height, while the bottom of the ear is the same height as the bottom of your nose.
Also that line sticking up on the left side that you've used to indicate the crease between the chest and the sleeve is too high. Makes his shoulder look to thin, but it's a common mistake to make when you're drawing a close up.
And although there's nothing wrong with the width of your neck, you should be aware of where the neck connects with the back of the head and the jaw. If you fix the ear, it won't be so bad, though.

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