the story of goa'uld

[ghostcat]

i thank you, my good friend Veers, for posting that ( had some trouble with registering).

i will now contineu with the next chapter:

chapter II

while exploring their new surroundings, called sirus , the Azurians discoverd that the Rheinland battleships look allmost the same as the dark cloud their anncestors onboard their first days of the Goa'uld had drawn down, after doing even closer research, the Azurians discoverd that The dark cloud that shrouded their prevous home world, a prototyp of a rheinland battleship was.

engaging in a brutal fight with the Rheinlanders, inflicting heavy losses on their opponents, The Azurians returned to safe ground, and were able to intercept a rheinland prison ship, which appeared 2 be carrying innocent people, that looked real familliars to the Azurians.
pls gimme some comments on how u like this :D if its annoying il stop;)

hmmm... keep it up
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........Once more unto the breach, dear friends, once more;..........But when the blast of war blows in our ears,.....
........Or close the wall up with our English dead...........................Then imitate the action of the tiger;.................
........In peace there's nothing so becomes a man........................Stiffen the sinews, summon up the blood,.........
........As modest stillness and humility:........................................Disguise fair nature with hard-favour'd rage!....

Dasher

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"Oh come on, slow and steady doesn't win any races, fast and steady does."

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