A new RP idea

[Dusty Lens]

I'm sure Dusty wants a nice purple one with flowers on!

I'm not one to turn down a balloon.

That being said I concur with most of the points that Zig brought up in regards to the quality and depth of thought involved with your story. I could fly a Zoner Juggy through some of the plotholes, slalom a Whale through the inconsistencies and take a Starflea into combat against Zap's Xeno Eagle with a solid chance of victory with your dubious grounding in reality.

I'm the last one to turn down a chuckle, but if you're forwarding this as a serious exercise of thought I might suggest putting it through the meat grinder one more time.