"Cutlass" Bomber

[tansytansey]

I don't know if it's just the angle it was at before or if you actually changed the upper ring, but it looks a lot better in that last picture. The support thingy Jamez suggested fits pretty nicely, but perhaps tilt the lower part of it down a bit, so it isn't parallel? Not sure if that would look a little better or not, but it struck my eye as a bit of a hard angle the way it is now. Another possibility would be breaking it from two into three parts and "smoothing" it out that way. Up to you.

Definitely getting there, keep at it. Certainly a fine example of borderworlds shipbuilding, I would be proud to fly this ship.

I did change it slightly, I made it less rounded than before. It might be partly to do with the angle too. I can easily play around with the support thing, see if I can make it look a little better.

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