Sounds fine to me.
Your RP'ing a detachment of the BAF and not the the whole thing, so thats ok. Im going to assume you would obey BAF Admirals orders as well.
As far as the name goes. Calling them ther 23rd just makes me think of American Military Units a.k.a Liberty, that already has numbered mini-factions. I think giving them a nickname of somesort rather than a Numbered tag would make you stand out more as Bretonians. Somthing like "The Iron Wing" or something like that would be fitting I think.
Other than that seems good to me, so long as they stay in thier areas and we dont see 23rd|'s camping Jumpholes and Bases you should be well recived.
Quote:does bretonia really need another armed forces faction?
Does Liberty need more than one Navy Faction? Probably not.
At least he has given them a purpose rather than people slapping a tag on and acting like they own the place.
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