Everything seems very good, and I had already read it all when you gave out the link to your website.
And speaking of which, I REALLY recommend that you pop a link in a very visible place in your post here to your website, so everyone might see what a good job you did with it.
I can tell you it will contribute to making a very good impression on people.
Some people might mind the mandatory donations of money to the faction bank, I suggest you use the method of trial and error to adjust the fees if they prove to need adjusting.
And lastly .. I just want to point out, that concerning the entry on the Colonial Remnant in your faction diplomacy, it's all good, and we agree that we should be neutral/friendly, I just want to ask you to edit the part where you say that we are "Guests of the IMG", which is somewhat incorrect.
The Colonial Remnant is fully independent and is trying to expand it's nation in the Taus.
But this is not the place to discuss such things.
I propose that you input:
Colonial Remnant, =CR= - The Colonial Republic in the Taus, we respect them and their actions against piracy. The newfound cold relations with the IMG are not our problem. Friendly-neutral.
Everything else is just super.
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