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[Xareck]

Your RP is OK, but it seems incomplete. "Sell Cardi to Manhattan" seems like a pretty uninteresting (and almost nonsensical) goal for a faction. Surely that is a means to some other end -- making money, spreading addiction, some strange thing to do with Nomads, sticking it to "the man," etc. Why the fetish for this particular commodity? If you know the characters' underlying motivations for their behavior, I suspect you will find even more RP opportunities.

For example, you sound a bit like a street gang of sorts (like many pirate factions). How do you intend to seize some "turf" for your group? The Lane Hacker connection is strained -- would they really like this group operating from their bases? Do you represent competition with other local gangs? There are more RP opportunities here as well.

We view Liberty military and a few of their politicians corrupt, one of them being the father of our Taskmasters.

And yes, one of our larger goals is to bring Cardamine into Liberty, as nearly all of our characters have the cardamine element tied in with their stories quite deeply. For example; John has a few mental issues with the Phantoms, and to deal with that, he uses absurd amounts of Cardamine. Whenever the Novak twins are away from one another from extended periods of time, they tend to relieve stress by using cardamine. Eh?

Also, I believe our Lane Hacker ties aren't all too strained, we were offered to join them at one point if I remember correctly.

I see your point about lack of goals, and we are currently working on developing some RP that will hopefully progress more personal goals, rather then goals that mutually help other people.

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I dont like the lulwutting,
The excessive use of Falcatas because all you care about is PVP.
U haz ur own Bomber so stick to it.

Whats with that Spyglass of yours? He a lulwut or something because he just roams about LULPEWing stuff.

Please sort it out.

1. Lolwutting?
2. Falcatas?
3. Haz?
4. LULPEWing?

Either you didn't even take the time to read and see what faction you're criticizing, you've confused us with some other faction, or you're just lying for some unknown reason.

1.We don't allow "lolwutters" within our ranks, as evident when we grounded George Lopez for loling off in California.
2. None of the VR fly Falcatas. So where you get that, I don't know. Also, all we care about is PVP? THAT must be why we have weekly diplomatic events with several different factions! Ah, I get it now! </sarcasm>
3. What?
4. Just, no. Dream may be on the Spyglass once every know and then, but when he does, it's rare that he leaves our systems of operation. Again, where you got that statement, I don't know.

Please rethink your response.

@The ZoI Map: That was an error on my part, I wasn't paying attention when I pentooled around those systems. I'll make a new Map and have it fixed shortly.

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