The Phoenix Liberty Fleet

[JakeSG]

Great! A cap faction! I was just thinking we needed a few more to boost our ranks. Just yesterday when we were fighting an Order gunboat we could only get two LABC's into the air to fight him off. I was like 'WTF?!?! WHERE IS OUR CAP SUPPORT?!?!'. Well, now with you guys in your own faction I'm going to guess you'll be more coordinated and organised and we'll be able to mount a proper defense.

Cynicism aside, you're going to want more background and a clearer set of goals, prefferably one not already dominated by the LN/LPI/LSF. You'll also be wanting to spend some more time with the official factions of Liberty, learn how things work around there, as I'm not sure you know too much about it from your introduction. You might try taking on the role of the Liberty Cutter Service, they disappeared a while back, but a few of the members are still around.

After re-reading it, I think you have potential to create a decent faction, but you're rushing things. Especially in a place where more people aren't needed. And as Sindy said, some of your members are a little less... bright.

Oh, and... If you didn't pass the entrance exams, why the hell would you have access to Dreads and other big, mean ships? >.>

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