My first real attempt at forum roleplay.

[Marburg]

For a 1st attempt, it's pretty dang good:cool:

I won't criticize the actual content, cause everybody's a critic already, but the more you do it, be easier it will be to write.

Now...I really like that it's short. IMHO, a string of short posts describing one scene is better than having to endure one long wall of text.

I hope you get into it & start to write more...Lots of people see forum RP < server RP but personally, I think the're about equal.

(actually, sometimes I think that forum RP trumps server RP, cause there are almost no limits to what you can do with your characters, but on the server, there are only so many things a serverload of people can do from the cockpit of a spaceship before it seems a dime a dozen.)

Keep it up:)

::edit- sorry...I had a good sized brain-fart & thought I posted in the feedback thread:$could one of the staph be so kind as to move my comments to the proper spot?::

'Burgy, you owe me a skype call for this. In fact, that's 2 now. What ever are we going to do with you?

<3 Mwerte

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